असून वळणे रीत प्रीतिची – ASUN VALANE RIT PRITICHI


In this Ghazal Poetess tells us about the method of love of her beloved person.
In his path, though there are so many curves, the method of love is too straight. So she loves this method and path also.
This Ghazal is a type of Rivayati Ghazal. Kafiyas  used in this Ghazal are: saral(straight), Ghazal, sajal(full of water), kushal(skilled), vimal(clear), achal(not moving).

Path of love has many turns and twists. Ghazal also is the way to express our love. Therefore in the Ghazal there are turns and twists together with thorns and flowers. In this Ghazal the concept “Shraddha” is described in a poetic manner.
Here “shraddha“ means devoted love on our own existence.

असून वळणे रीत प्रीतिची सरळ तुझी मज आवडते
ऐक प्रियतमा तुझ्याच इतुकी गझल तुझी मज आवडते

कधी झरा हा खळाळणारा किती मनाला लोभवतो
डोहासम पण गहिरी प्रीति सजल तुझी मज आवडते

विरघळते तव नयनी पुरती खास तुझी ही नजर अशी
ओठ उघडण्या एक अंगुली कुशल तुझी मज आवडते

कितीक नजरा चंचल भ्रमरी भुरळ पाडती जरी कुणा
गोठवणारी लीन पापणी अचल तुझी मज आवडते

रंगबिरंगी नकली वेष्टन हवे कशाला श्रद्धेला
अस्तित्वावर उत्कट भक्ती विमल तुझी मज आवडते

 

 


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